Thursday, 12 November 2009

FEEDBACK FROM COLLEGE MAGAZINE

FEEDBACK

After recieving feedback from my college magazine front cover, I decided to make some minor changes to my work.

I was told that having a main image where the student is looking at the audience would act as an improvement to my magazine.

Also, the fact that i had put black writing on a dark background meant that the writing was unable to be read. This needed to be changed too.

As I was unable to find my copy of the magazine cover I had made, I was forced to use a previous draft I used before I developed it.

.. I took these comments into consideration and applied the changes to the draft I found. This is shown below:

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